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GRE写作评分及常见问题解读
GRE作文包括issue和argument两部分，总分为6分，以下是GRE作文评分的一些标准，希望能给广大GRE考生带来一些帮助。
(1) ncomplexity:事物的两面性(同一事物有优点就有缺点，相比较的事物有各自的优缺点)，从多角度分析事物(分析不同领域中，不同情况下)。论点一边倒的文章论述得再好也只能得5分。
(2) insightful position：在有全面深刻理解的基础上，观点最好新颖独到(对ets来说)，但必须保证能自圆其说。
(3) conveys meaning nskillfully:可用于论证的一切技巧(估计老美自己用起来也得费点心思)。比如文章的行文方向，起承转合不用明显的标志词(first, second, nhowever, on the other hand, the second example illustrating my npoint)，而是依靠论述的内在脉络(只可意会不可言传)自然而然的引到下一块内容。
(4) compelling reasons(reason就已经够令人头疼的了，有加了个compelling)：这是最重要的一个得分点。
(5) persuasive nexamples：用来支持reason的，使抽象的reason更具体，更易被读者理解，从而产生共鸣，或使其更可信，更有说服力。可用的例子有自己的经历，引言。
(6) well-focused:简单说就是不跑题。中心论点明确，全文不跑题;各段主题句明确，围绕主题句论述。
(7) well-organized：文章采用的论述结构，分几个部分论述，每部分有几段，各部分、各段间的关系是什么。
(8) connecting ideas logically：using transitional nphrases起承转合词，过渡句，或有此种作用的句子，总之起到help organize the ideas and move the argument nforward。
(9) 跟着感觉走没错。
(10) 不要罗嗦，表达简洁。但如果以上几点做得好，这缺点可以忽略不计。
(11) 基本上挺难，但不影响大局，为避免重复大胆的用你想用的词，阅卷人能理解。
(12) sentence variety：最好长短句结合，ets藐视总用短句的人：Since most of the sentences are nshort and choppy, the ideas they try to communicate are also choppy.
(13) 还有语法错误等等，小毛病，先把上面的问题解决好在理它吧。
GRE issue写作优秀实例：权威问题
题目：
Much of the information that people assume is 'factual' actually turns out nto be inaccurate. Thus, any piece of information referred to as a 'fact' should nbe mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future.
大多数人们认为是事实的信息结果实际上都是不准确的。因此，任何据称是事实的信息都应该被质疑，因为它在将来很可能会被证明为是错误的。
正文：
Should we be doubtful to all the information at hands because the rightness nof which is uncertain? The speaker claims so, I concede that people often commit nvarious fallacies in the course of cognizing things, however I fundamentally ntake exception of the arguer's assertion to mistrust every fact we might nencounter. And I will substantially discuss my views thereinafter.
To begin with, the speaker seems to implicate that a fact would be proven nfalse in the future under numerous circumstance. Nevertheless I prefer to arguer nthat facts never change. No matter how did the Medieval Church and Inquisition npersecute Bruno, the fact never changes that the earth is far from being the ncenter of the universe as the religious sovereigns had assumed or hoped for, nwhile just a minor particle in it. Equally, no matter how Edison had tried to nincite the public fear and distrust to the alternative current electricity, the nfact never changes that Teals' electrical system is vastly superior to his ndirect current electrical one, and would be accepted and applied in larger nrange.
However, what do change are the human's objective interpretations to facts. nOne compelling argument to this point is that, due to the limitation of human's nknowledge and comprehensive capability, they tend to make insufficient or even nfalse understanding to the certain fact. An apt illustration is the changes of ncognition to disease. While at the ancient time, our progenitors believed the a nman becoming a patient for the reason that he had conduct crimes or offended nsome ghosts or spirits,the contemporary people have well know that the varies of npathogens are the basic causes to our diseases, and the defects of our immune nsystem and so forth are also the factors as well. Another argument for the nchange of comprehension to fact is that different people always observe and ninterpret from different perspectives. Though the Relativity theory is not well ncompliable with the Quantum mechanism, no one call the greatness of both nEinstein and Bohr, because their theories are based on distinct views, the nformer from the macrocosm and the later from the microcosm.
Notwithstanding the foregoing reasons for that human tend to make fallacies nduring the cause of comprehending and cognizing facts, these reasons should nnever be the excuses to doubt every conclusion we might draw from facts. Based non certain rational inference and proper knowledge fundament, the conclusions we nmake might well be justifiable, if not completely right, to certain degree. What nwe need to do is to promote the enterprise of pursuing the better answer and try nto use the result we have get to application, instead of wasting our time to nundue doubt and suspicion. Though the medical scientists have not fully nunderstood the mechanism of how the does the implanted organ interact with the nwounded body, they are not refrain from using the implanting skill to save npatients, of course the precondition or which is that this technology is much nwell established than the fundamental theory.
To sum up, while I advocate the speaker's opinion that it is inevitable for nhuman to comprehend facts inaccurately, for the reason of the limitation of the nabilities, I essentially disagree with his assertion that facts will continually nalter themselves, as well as his recommendation to discredit any piece of fact. nIn the final analysis, I would arguer once more that facts never change and nalthough the misunderstanding to them is inevitable, we should not defer nourselves from the pursuit to fully comprehending them.
GRE issue写作优秀实例：思想家
题目：
Most societies do not take their greatest thinkers seriously, even when nthey claim to admire them.
大多数社会都没把最伟大的思想家当回事，虽然有时候这些社会自称是求才若渴的。
正文：
In this busy, packed and dull world, people’s most important concerning is nhow to make a living. They work assiduously to make money, to support their nfamily, to purchase houses and cars. Hardly one common individual knows who ntheir greatest thinkers are，not mention to take them seriously. Admittedly, in nsome cases, people claim that they admire the greatest thinkers; however, they nactually know little about what the greatest thinkers’ thoughts are. The fact nis, in history of human civilizations,most societies do not take their greatest nthinkers seriously, even when the greatest thinkers are seemed to be nrespected.
Generally, whatever societies the greatest thinkers are in, they have nsimilar characteristics, such as high intelligence, eccentric temperament, wide nrange of knowledge, and the most essential one: the deeply and often predicted nthoughts, which is the product of real wisdom. On one hand, it is the thoughts nthat distinguish the greatest thinkers from the mass. On the other hand, it is nalso the thoughts, however correct and predicted, which cause these elites out nof the mass’ sights and put them into an embarrassment in which few can nunderstand them and their thoughts. A proper example is the passional German nphilosopher and poet Nietzche. Nietzche is a pioneer, whose profound exploration nin philosophy influenced the descendants deeply. Yet his life is miserable and nfull of tragedies. Without money and job, Nietzche lived an impoverished life, nwhich along with loneliness defeated him at last: he became insane when 45, and ndied 10 years later. Until that time, almost no one knew him or his thoughts. nEven today, many people including some scholars call him mad philosopher.
In some worse cases, the greatest thinkers are even persecuted by their nsocieties since the greatest thinkers always tend to have skeptical and critical nthoughts, which the manipulators fear mostly and manipulated reluctant to naccept. The reason is that once the advanced ideas, which are against the old nones, are accepted by mass, the domination or the present social system will in nthe danger of collapse. And at the same times, most people are reluctant to nadmit that what they believe in or cherish, however,always prejudice and rigid nideas set in people’s minds beforehand, are not the truth but falsehood or nillusions. A case in point is the great astronomer Copernicus, who developed the ntheory that the earth and other planets revolve around the sun. Although the ntheory was the most advanced astronomy theory in that time, it hadn’t come out nof press until the year before Copernicus’ death because of mass being strongly nagainst it especially the powerful churches, which were afraid that such a ntheory would shake authority of theology.
In some specific period, for political reasons, thinker and intellectuals nas a whole undergo ruthless treatment, such as the Culture Revolution from 1966 nto 1976 in China. During those ten years, many great thinkers and intellectuals nare forbidden to think and express their thoughts freely. Some of them even nencountered physical torture. A crueler example is Qin Dynasty in China 2000 nyears ago. Yingzheng, the first emperor of China, sentenced the thinkers who nheld different political or social ideas from him to death. Moreover, he buried ntheir writings.
It is the greatest thinkers’ tragedy not to be understood or even be npersecuted. It is also the fact that human beings are always shortsighted, nsometimes even foolish. Nevertheless, what is truth will never change itself or ndisappear along with the elapsing of time however strong the falsehood seems to nbe. Hence, though almost all the greatest thinkers are hermits, some of them may nbe even the prisoners in their societies; they would gain their perpetual lives nthrough their glaring
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